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Featured project: Strong Design Studios rebrand and website copywriting

Posted on: October 18th, 2012 by Kim Higdon

Melissa Balkon of Strong Design Studios asked me to help her refine her brand. We started meeting in person, once a week to just chat about things. What unfolded, was a nearly year-long project that entailed examining every single aspect of her business to define processes, workflow, sales funnels, financial analysis, and of course, her entire brand and the visual and verbal elements that this entailed.

The Goal:  

Strong Design Studios was looking to refine their processes and get a solidified vision of her brand down so she wasn’t tempted to constantly redesign her own webpage, as this was wasting time and was a signal of a larger problem. Melissa had a very strong idea of what her brand was, but needed someone to help her guide her through the process of fully understanding her market position and what she offered her clients that was different from everyone else.

The Process: 

Through guided discussion, I helped Melissa to explore the competitive landscape, her own personal reasons for starting her business, her personal and professional goals, ideal customer analysis, existing customer interviews, positioning statement exercises, and much much more. From these discussions, Melissa was given weekly “homework” assignments where she would research or create on her own time, and I would do the same should we be at a place where content or copywriting was needed, such as in the development of her tagline and final positioning statement verbiage.

Once the foundation was set for her brand, we were able to begin the marketing materials that would ultimately be the customer-facing portion of her brand, and needed as much attention as everything else had received. This process was infinitely smoother given the intimate knowledge we now had of her brand, goals, and customers.

The Big Idea: 

The underlying concept behind every part of Melissa’s brand was “craftsman bungalow home”. We came to this brand concept because her use of strong, but simple design aesthetic, her customers’ small businesses that often get wrapped up into their personal lives, and the warmth and comfort associated with being home. This style of home was also the first home ever built that had any sense of style, but was still affordable to the everyman, similar to Strong Design Studios’ offerings. This concept played through in everything from the design of the website, to the verbiage that lives on it, to the materials and customer interactions Melissa has on a regular basis.

The Good Stuff: 

Working together, Melissa and I came up with the concept for her tagline based on her desire to always simplify.

Strong Design Studio’s positioning statement also worked as an introductory headline on her website. The subheadline and button microcopy reinforce the primary message.

Her website copy was to come across as approachable, kind, and straight forward, just like what a customer would feel working directly with Melissa.

We developed a process for her projects, giving her some structure and repeatability to her work so she could offer her clients even more expediency without sacrificing quality.

Melissa wanted to add a magazine cover-type of page before visitors landed on her blog to ensure they were seeing the most relevant material possible. These sections were defined and planned out for ongoing content.

So there you have it. If you’re interested in how English Moon can help refine your brand through messaging, get in touch with us!

Project Spotlight: BounceU Website Copy

Posted on: August 8th, 2012 by Kim Higdon

Take an inside look at what we do here at English Moon. BounceU is an indoor trampoline park that’s the birthday party destination and they needed a little assistance with some website copywriting.

The Goal:  

They were looking for a little clean up of their simple website copy that conveyed important messages about safety and cleanliness, without losing the fun, exciting vibe that their more than 50 locations are built upon!

The Process: 

For a smaller project such as this, you’d think we’d expedite our process, right? Definitely not the case! Even if we were only hired to write a headline, a deep understanding of the tone, style, and mood of the brand is always required to ensure everything we create is effective, works within existing brand frameworks, and gets the message across as intended. For this project, we had the client complete a questionnaire about the brand, keywords, current messaging, target market, and business goals. From here, we felt comfortable enough to move forward and help them with their copywriting needs.

The Big Idea: 

After getting a deep understanding of their brand, the voice behind it, and the direction they were looking to take their website, we were able to polish up their website to quickly convey their crucial information in a way that was easy-to-understand. Behind every word was a sense of wonder and excitement, much like seeing through a child’s eyes. And the copy reads in a way that captures that youthful spirit.

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Project Spotlight: Epiphany Chocolates Product Naming

Posted on: June 5th, 2012 by Kim Higdon

Curious what it is we do here at English Moon? Well consider your curiosity cured! Below is an inside look at Epiphany Chocolate’s project which involved naming their scrumptious lineup of delicious chocolates, creating product descriptions, and naming their boxed collections.

The Goal: 

Create self-deprecating, spunky, and downright hilarious product names for their standard line of chocolates as well as seasonal selections. To go along with these fun names, the chocolates just had to have witty descriptions to match. The names and descriptions should be reminiscent of that of OPI nail polish, Diesel denim, and Daily Candy in their tone, style, and mood.

The Big Idea: 

During the course of the project, it became clear that each chocolate would require its own identity. In a similar vein to car naming, chocolates would almost inherit a personality to go along with their name so it would make it a little more interesting to refer to them in context. From this concept came the idea of giving each chocolate a fun spin on a famous person’s name, nickname, or associated idea. Don’t worry, you’ll understand when you see them!

The Process: 

How hard can naming chocolates really be? Hard! In order to find a unique place in a saturated market, research was key in naming these delectable delights. We wanted to ensure each name was unique and inspiring, bypassing any standard terminology (you know, like “delectable delights”) which required a ton of legwork. Over the course of 3 months, we worked very closely with Epiphany Chocolates to review, assess, and narrow down various selections of concepts and names to match. In the end, we named 24 different chocolates, created 24 inique chocolate descriptions, and named 7 names and descriptions for their boxed collections. Phew! Overall, the project was mouthwateringly (yes, that’s a word!) enjoyable and the clients were really a treat to work with! And in the interest of full disclosure, I received several samples to taste and it made the project even sweeter.

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